2ac Suo
you need to start slower, work on enunciation, work on pausing between arguments, and just slow down a bit to make this speech more flowable.
2nc malkovich
once you slowed down and got louder, your breathing and clarity issues were resolved.
i think youtake way too much.
1nr - aron
good. you're top heavy on politics, but i think thats ok since its a link turn debate. I'd like to see you include some more specific reasons why your link outweighs there - also you want to read more defensive args against their internal links on their link turns.
in general - the neg block does a good job of collapsing down, but i wonder if you wouldn't be better off reading less int he 1nc and just reading more cards on your intended strategies.
1ar - jack
sounds great but you spent almost as much time on T as the neg did. i think that's excessive. Make sure your T cards are much much shorter on budgetary fact issues; make sure you make the bare essential on the we meet arg.
I think you do a good job grouping the case advantages and explaining their impact, but i'm most concerned about your position on politics. You don't have a ton there. In a redo, you should move 30 seconds from T to START and read some ev on both the uniqueness debate and the link turn debate.
2nr malkovich
your 2nr starts off with the same choppy speaking, etc. i think you need to start slow and get into the groove - the tail end of your 2nc sounded great; but the start of your 2nr was the same issue.
we talked a bunch about your redo
1nc Aron
fine
2ac Suo
you need to start slower, work on enunciation, work on pausing between arguments, and just slow down a bit to make this speech more flowable.
2nc malkovich
once you slowed down and got louder, your breathing and clarity issues were resolved.
i think youtake way too much.
1nr - aron
good. you're top heavy on politics, but i think thats ok since its a link turn debate. I'd like to see you include some more specific reasons why your link outweighs there - also you want to read more defensive args against their internal links on their link turns.
in general - the neg block does a good job of collapsing down, but i wonder if you wouldn't be better off reading less int he 1nc and just reading more cards on your intended strategies.
1ar - jack
sounds great but you spent almost as much time on T as the neg did. i think that's excessive. Make sure your T cards are much much shorter on budgetary fact issues; make sure you make the bare essential on the we meet arg.
I think you do a good job grouping the case advantages and explaining their impact, but i'm most concerned about your position on politics. You don't have a ton there. In a redo, you should move 30 seconds from T to START and read some ev on both the uniqueness debate and the link turn debate.
2nr malkovich
your 2nr starts off with the same choppy speaking, etc. i think you need to start slow and get into the groove - the tail end of your 2nc sounded great; but the start of your 2nr was the same issue.
we talked a bunch about your redo
2ar
we discussed redos a bunch.